H50 Drabble for the Weekend Challenge : A Chance Meeting

[kitmerlot_1213]

This is my first attempt at femslash--please try not to laugh :)

This is a 200 word drabble for the Weekend Challenge at  1-million words:


Lori turned to grin at her companion and Rachel smiled back, the setting sun bathing the British woman’s face with an orange and pink glow.  Impossibly, it made the dark haired woman even more beautiful than she already was.

Rachel reached out a hand and grasped Lori’s forearm, gently running her fingers down Lori’s arm to clasp her hand.  Lori’s fingers tightened around Rachel’s and the two sighed t at the contact.
It was an odd coincidence that Lori and Rachel had even met, let alone become involved with each other.

Rachel and Stan had hosted a garden party and Lori had been invited through her cousin, who was Stan’s new business partner.

Lori had almost ran the other way when she realized that this was Danny’s infamous ex-wife but Rachel had won her over by asking for a chance to make a second first impression and Lori had been swayed  by her warm brown eyes.

She could see why Danny couldn’t quite get Rachel out of his system.

Now neither woman could imagine their lives without the other one in it.

“How much longer do we have?”  Lori whispered.

“Stan will be home in an hour,” Rachel murmured back.

Comments

[simplyn2deep.livejournal.com]

great job with it! the little tidbit about how they actually met goes a long way towards making it that much more believeable.

[kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I tried to give them a quick back story that made sense :)

[hanorganaas.livejournal.com]

OHHHHH I LOVE IT send me a pair and a prompt as an award.

[kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com]

Alright, I'm glad you liked it :):)

I'm pretty easy with my prompts: H50 McDanno, sitting on a couch together on a lazy afternoon :)

[haldoor.livejournal.com]

Oh, well done, you! ;-)

[kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Drabbles are definitely a fun writing exercise, forcing you to tell a story in a certain amount of workds.

[kaige68.livejournal.com]

WOW!!!

Wonderfully done!

[kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com]

You are too kind :)